it shouldn’t start with peter parker narating. it should start at dr. coners lab, and he’s doing some expariments with liserds, to try to grow his arm back, so that he could have to. so, he makes a drink, from the lisered DNA, and drinks it, and it dosen’t get digested, and it mixes with his blood, and with his, DNA, and his arm grows back, but he tranceforms into the lisered.

now this next part isn’t true to the comics.

now, after the lisered is born, then something else terrible is happening. if you remember from part 3, perer parker brought the symbiote sample into dr. coners for testing. well its still there. and then, the lisered nockes it over, with its tail, and the black gue comes out, and emediatly senses its agresion. then it attaches on to him, and then he can shoot webs, (from spider-man), and he can breath fire, (an additional feture). then he breakes out of the lab, and he starts web swining his way through the city. and he’s now filled with so much rage, cuz of the sute, and cuz the sute now told conners that peter didn’t listen to his advise, over the phone, in part 3, when he asks him if he put any more of that stuff onto him, under the influence of the symbiote, and now conneres wants revenge.

then you met peter parker, but he’s not in his spider-man sute. he’s with mary jane, and she’s asking him why he punched her, (cuz if you remember at the bar in part 3, when peter got in a huge fight, then he punched her), and he dosen’t tell her why. this is because he makes a promise to the symbiote, (if you rembember at the end of part 3, when peter parker’s trying to get the sute off of him, this was a seen that they deleted, but they show it as a flashback in part 4, that in his mind, the sute is talking to him, and telling him that what ever you do, don’t tell mj, that it is what convinced you to hit her, [kinda like in part 1, when norman tells peter not to tell harry, then he dies, huh]). so he dosn’t tell her, and it gets ugly, and she leaves new york city, cuz she’s so alone, and has nobody to lean on, so she leaves the city, and she gose to LA, and she tryes for acting there, and she siscedes, and she dose well.

then we all see a seen, where at oscorp, burnered dies of a broken heart, cuz he blames himself of his death.

then, at oscorp, the new boss there, dose some exparements, like norman osborn did, but this time with orange stuff, and it gose wrong, and he gets tranceformed into the hobgoblin. but, like the comics, then the hobgoblin is way more powerful then the greengoblin ever was. so then it starts to rampage through the city.

then a villian from part 3 comes back, and its the sandman, but this time, he’s a hero.

then the chife of polise, mr. stacey gets fired, and bruce camble gets hired.

then j jona jamison, wants spider-man dead so badly, that he hires a new villion to kill him, and that villion is the scorpian.

now with mj gone, then who’s the lisered going to take capitve. well, he desides to take Aunt May captive. then, since every one knows about the lisered, so spider-man knows that Aunt May is captive, and so he rushes to her rescue, and just as soon as they get there, then they fight, emediatly. then, when spider-man gets there, then the lisered breaths fire on spider-man , and his mask catches on fire, but he dosen’t burn up, cuz he takes it off, and it burns up on the ground. then Aunt May is looking at her dear nephews face, but she’s in denile, and dosn’t think its spider-man. he dosn’t think anything of it, and keeps on fighting the lisered. then, he can’t find a way to hurt the lisered, but then he finds just 1 way. he lets the lisered burn him up, then eat him whole, and this is cuz, he realizes that the only way to defete him is to shoot web balls, inside of him, and they can’t be digested, then he dies in his sleep, but, unfortantly, spider-man gets digested, and dies. then the symbiote comes off of conners, and gose underground, and thats all you see of it, in part 4, whitch leaves a wide variaty of ideas, for part 5.

but, although the spider-man peter parker dies, then, a new spider man shall be born, (another thing thats untrue to the comics).

if you remember in part 1, at the lab, the spider bit peter parker, and then the character of the spider is gone. but then, (this is a seen kept secrite), but, the spider then, jumps into Harry osborns backpack, and gose to the osborn mantion with him, and it climbs through a whole, into the ciling, and makes a web, and lives up thee, never to come down, for 2 1/2 years. but, now, the character of the spider is back. now, this is a seen, that was kept secrite it part 3, but then, the spider comes down from the ciling, and bites harry. but this time, it takes longer for him to react to it though. (this is a flashback seen, in part 4). then, when you think that harry osborn is dead, then he’s not, he’s tranceforming into the new spider-man. then, he wants to avenge peter parkers death. so, then, to do some good, then he heads to the scorpian, and the hobgonlin, (since they both teemed up), to take them out.

then it turns out, that he can’t stop them alone, so then trillions, apon trillions, of cops came, but that still wasn’t enough, so then this is the reaperence of the sandman.

but then, there still to powerful, so then, so then, finally, a new hero comes into the movies, and its the, black cat. and so with these three heros, then there able to stop the scorpian, but not the hobgoblin. then, twards the end of the movie, then they find out that spider-man wasn’t really dead, (make what ever exuse that you want to make), then the 4 of them together, stops the hobgoblin.

now, your probally wondering what about mj. well nothing for this movie. she’ll come into play again, in a nother movie.

well, this is all i can think of. if you have any questions, then please email me, alright.

well, thanks for listening to my ideas.

seeya.

Mark

I’d tried doing something similar a few years ago after Nightcrawler disappeared from the X-movies but due to my age, I don’t think I’d get very far. -_- But this script is amazing! I think it’d be great if you tried to do something with it. =D (It’d be doing a great favor to those of us getting tired of all the Wolvie hype. LOL)

Thank you